Yesterday we did a Individual which is when you do a task by yourself. We called it 5 senses. we got given a picture to write about. (Show not tell.) See if you can guess what photo I am writing about!
It was a bright summer morning, I can hear a rip crashing against silky stuff. I can see shadows of things blowing in the wind if they were dancing to island music. Green hairy things were floating in the middles of the rip. The smell of salt wafting through the breezy air! I stack silk on top of each other as little calm twirls come and splash my silky stuff over. I can see star fish lying on the ocean floor.. I walk along the tide line as the delicate silky stuff sink my feet.
Kia ora Lani,
ReplyDeleteI think you're writing about the last photo. I like how you described the shadows dancing and the sand as 'silk'. What's another word you could use instead of stuff, I wonder?
Miss M