Learning Journey

Friday, 21 August 2015

Cameo

  Summer

This is an example of my writing using adverbs

Mmmm! We walk into the lovely patch of scented flowers growing in gardens. Quickly we stroll along the hot burning concrete put together with gluggy footprints. Goodie goodie gumdrop ice cream gets put together as we walk past the ice cream shop. As we walk onto the beach we see people fishing off the rocks and catching big snapper and putting them into big stinky buckets buckets. Slowly we walk along the beach and onto the sharp oysters rocks that look like they have been made into sculptures. Beach umbrellas get put up as we walk further along the burning sand. The smell of hot fish and chips being cooked welcomes us.




1 comment:

  1. Thats great writing Lani. Oyster shells looking like they had been made into sculptures made a clear picture in my mind. Have you thought about continuing the story?

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