Autumn

AUTUMN

Autumn comes into our world.

The tree becomes bare like someone is getting undressed.

The coloured leaves rot and disappear like magic.

Dew falls from the sky and glimmers in the sunlight

The leaves make colorful patterns like a patchwork blanket.

The trees are bare and look like big bare bones.`

Hunted

One dark night the moon was shining bright. Someone had set a trap. It was a serious hunter.

A small jungle boy peeked out from the trees. He was out searching for food when he smelt something. Rrrrrrrrrrrr! His tummy rumbled. He followed the smell to the roasted, oily chicken. He ran to get the chicken but as he stepped towards it, ‘CRACK’ he went flying down a dark deep hole. His eyes googled with fright and he felt a shiver pricking down his spine. A hunter came and blinded the boy with a camera flash.  Then he tied him upside down. The man flashed a wishbone in front of him. The pulled on it and the boy won. He used the wish-bone to escape without a sound. The hunter shook his head and ran after him with horror. SHIVER! SHIVER! SHIVER! The boy arrived at the edge of a bank and as he turned around the hunter was there. He looked around and saw the camera. He had an idea.  He blinded the hunter and ran. The hunter chased him like a gorilla straight into a cage. In the morning the hunter woke up. “WHHHHAT happened,” he shivered in a small voice. He was in a big cage surrounded by all the small people dancing and singing.

My first narrative.

                               What a night mare

One sunny Sunday morning it was snowing with delight. The witch stretched her body up from her lazy sleep and realised overnight a storm must of hit and shipwrecked them on an Island. It was a big sandy island. It was covered with trees with a big garden filled with beautiful roses and flowers.

They decided to go exploring and find something for breakfast when suddenly... “Watch out sophie!!” shouted the witch. They were surrounded with scorpions, dragons and tigers. AAAAAhhhh!!!!  The witch pulled out her magic wand. Abracadabra. All the animals turned into stone. “Yah I completed the task of animals,” shouted the witch. After that it everything turned out just fine. They lived happily on the island.